I don't know why there is this weird color change on the bottom third of each spread, but the individual page jpgs dont have that. and also, this isnt the order i want for the book, it's such a bitch to rearrange images on this thing.
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azita,
ReplyDeleteyour spreads have improved alot. there are a few things that were bothering me. the color of the type on spread 4 is hard to read. also, spread 6, line 4 of your text has more spacing than the rest. stands out. maybe that's what you want? also, i found my name on line one. cool. on the last spread, i wish there was some writing to conclude your story. something like "the morning comes and blah blah blah" or whatever you want, but it needs some sort of conclusion.
Hey Azita. Improvement. Sweet!
ReplyDeleteThere's some pixelation with the bloody legs. Could be clean up a bit. If you decide to leave it, blur it on purpose. I think it's worth trying out.
Tell me why I spot a big purple creature in the sketching spread?!?! Rad! Love the illustration and I love the little, "Hey, fuck you" message. Nice touch to an already complex spread. Love the color outlines as well. It gives it dimension. Sweet.
You know I dig the heroin dude. Now, let's go shoot up.
Good luck.
somehow im digging the color bar!!
ReplyDelete(the mistake on the bottom of each spread)
if u want u can elaborate that..
(but im assuming u don't have time..?)
it IS big improvement!
good job!
i agree with the lef comment. otherwise.. looking great.
ReplyDeletelove the first and the last spreads.
its kind of divided into yellow and blue. would it make sense to mix the spreads up?? jst an idea.